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Very good! I can see the scene very clearly and I can feel the tension between the two in the car. ... (10 months ago)
LOL, love it. I like how the protagonist notices something mundane while he is listening to Eddie sp ... (10 months ago)
Wow I can feel the heaviness. The tear rolling down his cheek was great. I would like to know what ... (11 months ago)
Ok I love this line: "She was young, attractive, with a face full of freckles and shoulders to ma ... (11 months ago)
Love it! I always kicked those snow gobs myself. (11 months ago)
I like this, really brings to my mind the feeling you get when you just can't stop laughing. (11 months ago)