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A nice journey into the absurd. I wonder if you'd be a fan of novels written by John Swartzwelder, t ... (8 days ago)
I agree with sanmiguel, I've been there, though I wonder if the simile in the middle would be a grea ... (8 days ago)
Look at all of those Minnesota bands being mentioned! :P I really, really dig the dialogue exchan ... (8 days ago)
This story has a lot going for it; it's a very cool moment to eavesdrop in on. I wonder if there are ... (8 days ago)
Hi, Andrew, thanks for writing. The situation is interesting, almost a preamble to a longer story to ... (2 months ago)
The opening paragraph paints a nice picture. I wonder if the third sentence in the third paragraph s ... (2 months ago)
Hi, Barbara. I like this story's tone, it is deeply reflective. The short sentences feel nice sandwi ... (2 months ago)
Hi, Bridget, thanks for writing. I think the sentence about the lovebirds' guilt lends insight into ... (2 months ago)
The four one-word sentences feed the tone; they're short and syncopated, lending themselves to being ... (9 months ago)
I feel like this piece is getting at the wolf-like hunt in a game of attraction, as sanmiguel points ... (9 months ago)